Sleeping Valor

lol. Thanks guys. And yeah, I was really trying to get past this so I could get to the next bit (especially since I realized I had strayed from the ...

=P I know you didn't. But I'm procrastinating so I felt like looking it up. ^_^ I will do a great number of things (even clean my room!) in the ...

Another comment! =P And here I thought this story was buried and forgotten. >.< And just when I'd dropped it, too. >_> As usual just after I had finished plotting ...

Woot. Thanks Heather! ^_^ I'm glad to get your review. I'll definitely be reworking the prologue to have more description, I just don't know when. I like setting things aside ...

Thanks guys! I have to study for exams, but when I have done (some) I will get those grammar things fixed in parts 1 and 2 and then maybe redo ...

Tiger?

*gasp* Three comments in the same night? For me? :D Thanks everybody! I'm glad you liked the new section. Ayra, I will definitely try to improve it with more description ...

Lol. Ok, so I have been taking my time with the second chapter, mainly because I have been plotting out the novel. And yes, this is going to be a ...

Thanks again guys. Hopefully chapter two will meet expectations. =P

I'm glad it surprised you, that was the idea. She herself was shocked when she realized she'd done it. I was trying to illustrate just how much Yazra's "villany" isn't ...

Thanks Jabber! I'll work on my tags (*is not used to using them much*) and I don't actually know how to use the log dash but word does let me ...

lol. Yes, the bear is kinda random, for the moment. But he is all part of the final nudges that push Yazra over and beyond the limits of her ability ...

=P Well if you really liked it might I recommend reading the complete chapter? There's at link at the top of the thread (or in my signature).

^_^ I've made the corrections to the story. If anyone sees any others let me know. (Also, comments on Yazra's personality itself would be cool. I'm especially wondering if she ...

Actually Jabber, I really appreciate your review. As must as I bask in all the positive feedback, I know because of the keyboard I had when I was writing it, ...